Hello all,
So I've been published online again recently: two flash fiction stories this time. Most recently:
BIG NEW BUMP - https://www.101words.org/big-news-bump/
and before that:
HOURGLASS - https://www.101words.org/hourglass/
I wish to thank 101 Words: a tremendous website for tiny creative gems; so much variety, many better than my own admittedly meager offerings. Your fantastic promotion of my work keeps me writing. You can surely expect more from me in the future.
In the meantime, why not pay them a visit?
https://www.101words.org/
I (sometimes) call myself Mr. Pondersome. I'm a rather wordy, weirdy person. I say hullo a lot. I write a lot more. While you're here, why not give some of it a read?
Tuesday, 12 January 2016
Friday, 1 January 2016
HAIR BECOMES A SILVERY GHOST (a.k.a. The First Thing I Wrote in 2016 - A First-ish Minute Gimmick)
Kelly scoops up some of Mrs
Eastwood's yellow hair, holding it taut between her fingers. She brings the
scissors to it.
'This is a lovely colour now,' she
says before cutting. She turns back to Jackie at the other end of the room.
'Well done, girl.'
Mrs Eastwood stares at them both
through the mirror in front of her. 'Doesn't she usually do dyes then?'
'Not really for such fair hair.'
Kelly lets the trimmed hairs trickle to the lino floor.
Jackie switches off the taps at the
rinsing sink. 'Usually just touch-ups, you know?'
Mrs Eastwood nods. Kelly loses grip
of her hair.
'Sorry, love,' her customer says.
'It looks lovely.'
Kelly returns to her original grip
and carries on cutting.
'Ooh,' Mrs Eastwood remarks
suddenly. 'You know Leigh?'
'Yes.'
'It's her 51st today!'
'Is it?'
'You sound shocked.'
'Sorry. If I'm honest, she always
seemed older than that.'
Mrs Eastwood waves her hand.
'Everyone says it. I think it too from time to time.'
Jackie wanders past. 'What do you
mean?'
Kelly pauses, sharing a
conspiratorial look with her customer. Should we let her in on the tragedy,
Kelly's slow blink asks. I prefer to think of it as an in-joke, Mrs Eastwood's
raised eyebrow replies.
She holds Jackie's gaze through the
mirror as she rummages around in her trouser pocket. Eventually she pulls out
her phone and flicks through some pictures before settling on one.
'Here,' she says, passing the phone
to Kelly who passes it on to Jackie.
'God,' she mutters, 'I mean, Oh,
bless.'
Mrs Eastwood laughs. 'She's a
sweetheart. She just looks tired.'
'She must have led an exhausting
life,' Kelly says.
'Actually, no,' Mrs Eastwood
replies, wagging her finger, 'It's hereditary. Leigh looks much like our aunt
did. Unfortunately she didn't get as far as fifty.'
'Oh dear,' Jackie sighs, passing the
phone back.
'Yes. We Sedgwick girls go grey
early.'
'Not you though.' Kelly holds up
some of Mrs Eastwood's hair.
Her customer shakes it loose.
Jackie arrives at the front counter.
'It's horrible what ageing does to some people. Can't be just genes, there's
got to be some cruelty to it.'
Mrs Eastwood smiles sweetly. 'Well,
all I know is that it happens regardless. So don't you go wasting that bright,
soft skin and beautiful red curls!'
Jackie fingers a strand. She's a
natural blonde but Mrs Eastwood wouldn't know that. Jackie checked the roots
just this morning.
'And you,' Mrs Eastwood says to
Kelly, 'You have the right idea, love, you found yourself a handsome
entrepreneur.'
'Hank's just setting out on his
own.'
'Still. He's not a brickie.' Mrs
Eastwood's husband was a bricklayer. 'You used your supermodel cheekbones well.
I wasted mine.'
Kelly tries to figure out the best
way of denying this; to say that Hank was more beautiful without implying that
he doesn't quite love her the same way, to state that his job doesn't really
come into it without giving away that things aren't really going so well for
him at the moment.
'Can I see that photo again?' she
asks instead.
Mrs Eastwood brings out her phone
with the picture on it. Kelly examines it closely.
'It is unfair but if you let your
hair go that poorly-treated you're going to look permanently exhausted.' She
resumes her scissor position. 'Hair becomes a silvery ghost of itself if you
don't keep it up.'
Mrs Eastwood puts the phone away.
'I'll be seeing Leigh in a few hours. Of course, I won't pass on any comments.'
'Thanks.' Kelly smiles. 'Tell her
our door is always open.'
'And our appointment book is
currently wide open,' Jackie mutters.
Kelly glares back at her but then
sees the clean, white pages she is flicking through.
During this distraction, Mrs
Eastwood finds herself frowning at her reflection. Underneath her golden
tresses she can feel her hair curling up and slowly giving in. It is, of
course, gone as soon as Kelly turns back around.
Kelly cuts in thoughtful silence for
a while, pretending to focus on each lock of her customer's replenished hair.
Jackie closes the appointment book
and straightens up. 'I had my first grey hair recently.'
Both Kelly and Mrs Eastwood look up.
'I won't say where it is.'
They all laugh.
The amusement brings on a rush of
truth in Jackie. 'I've also started to wear slippers a lot.'
'Oh dear,' Mrs Eastwood says.
'Bless,' Kelly adds.
Jackie shrugs. Solidarity.
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